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David E. Roy  Ph.D.'s avatar

I’ve read this, including re-reading parts, and I find it hard to follow. Your transitions sometimes escape me.

Anthony's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it. I appreciate feedback. Is there a particular section or sections that lose you?

David E. Roy  Ph.D.'s avatar

One example is the paragraph beginning with, “Baker kept the alarming number and dropped the answer.” I’m not sure what the answer refers to, for example. It’s too implicit. And that continues throughout

I do understand that the huge split between small businesses and big corporations was the more important side of the poll. We can imagine being an individual with a dream vs. something that is an impersonal high level abstraction which has gained such enormous power over us in so many areas of our lives.

I’m on Medicare with AARP UnitedHealth as my supplement. Try to find a psychologist with just Medicare. I’ve had to move twice and at my age (82 in a week), this means finding health care for nearly every body system. But if you require two services from the same doctor, you have to make a second appointment which usually means between 2-3 hours with travel and waiting. My joke is that my social life consists of health professionals.

Ralph Dise's avatar

I partially agree with Dr. Roy, above. But for me your transitions always escape me.