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Baz's avatar

This was interesting and a good insight to a Google product I hope I will never use.

Tanyer Hyde's avatar

Sorry but nobody slices pepperoni by hand in a commercial operation. Also, I noticed a tone of hopelessness and despair in your narrative, which was your personal choice. Many other interpretations of the human circumstance exist to describe those living as your protagonist does.

Baz's avatar

Probably the way pepperoni is sliced isn’t particularly relevant in the narrative arc of the book - but well spotted.

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Baz's avatar

I can see that it’s useful hearing/seeing your text fed back to you in various styles/voices - hang on to your inner voice though - I think it’s doing the same job better.

Baz's avatar

Never knew of Robert Greene - will definitely be checking out his writings- getting banned from prison libraries is a positive attribute in my book.

𝓙𝓪𝓼𝓶𝓲𝓷𝓮 𝓦𝓸𝓵𝓯𝓮 (𝓜)'s avatar

Why do you have to be an asshole? People don't like assholes. The more you know ⭐🌈

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Bill Bradford's avatar

"Tanyer Hyde" = "tan your hide", i.e., "give you a spanking"..... Just sayin', Explorer....

"I choose to be an infectious carrier of hope, optimism, & a positive mindset, and spread immunity to negativity & pessimism"....